Update- Laws of Motion Chapter 3

[heathershaped]

So, this one doesn't have any sex in it. Guess I'll really find out if I can write. hehe.

Title: Laws of Motion
Rating: R
Genre: Romance
Summary: All Harry needed was a wake-up call. When he gets it, though, Hermione just might not know what hit her. R for sex and mild language.

 
Chapter 3- The Law of Reciprocal Action

Comments

[castledown.livejournal.com]

And write you can. Very well, I'd say. I loved the Harry/Scrimgeour hostility, especially S's impassiveness towards Harry. Really made him seem cold and condescending.

My extended comments are in my review on Portkey, but I'm really loving this story right now. I can't wait to see what happens to Ron and Hermione, and I'm hoping it won't hurt H/Hr too much :)

Seriously, very fucking cool. You rock \o/

[heather11483.livejournal.com]

Thank you, so much. I'm glad I got the desired reaction from the scrimgeour/harry bout.

Loved your comments on PK. Yeah, I hope I don't disappoint with the action next chap. Might take a little longer to post, because it might be a little harder for me to write, but we'll see.

No, YOU fucking rock. :D

Well...wtf mate.

[castledown.livejournal.com]

I take it the review in question was "i don't like how you're making the ministry seem all powerful all of the sudeen SS a joke."

Since the poor fool can't string a sentence together without sounding even vaguely coherent, I wouldn't worry about it.

Tell him to turn off the computer, go to bed, and when he wakes up, go back to school :D

Ignore them <3

Re: Well...wtf mate.

[heather11483.livejournal.com]

No, this one was from someone called MCBrit. It was about half a page long and it was nothing but awawawawawawawawawawawawawawawaw, literally for half a page. So I replied, saying something like, sorry you didn't like it, and then two more popped up in its place. I thought I was getting spammed or something so I deleted them.

Anyway that's why I took off the LJ comment I sent you, because I realised it probably wasn't serious.

That other reviewer...yeah, whatever. Can't please everyone. Thanks for the kind words, though. :D

Sorry for bugging you; my workday was coming to a close and I think my brain was leaking.

Hope you're having a good one, and hopefully you're writing more Ties. lol. -H.